Descriptive ~ Creative workshop #1 – Follow up

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Yuvan’s first ever story on that picture in his own words…

Picture :- A woman and her cat  travelling in a Taxi

The story goes like..”a lady and her cat were travelling in a taxi and they were ”

Yuvan continues as

going to a movie called The transformers – dark of the Moon – in China. They both liked the movie and they couldn’t wait until their next movie on Wednesday..

The next day  they went to  the Merlion and had lot more  fun and went back home.

Two things to improve

His handwriting was not his usual good.. and he left too much space between the words.. which was result of hurrying up to finish writing what he thought…

He could fill in between the  incidents….next time may be…

But well done!!!!

 

 

 

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2 thoughts on “Descriptive ~ Creative workshop #1 – Follow up

    Tamizhini said:
    October 12, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    Nice that ur continuing to write.I wrote a blog after a long time..Then visited my Blogger friend’s pages..Surprisingly almost all of them have stopped writing.Good to knw that ur continuing.My regards to ur son Yuvan.

    Suhanya responded:
    November 20, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    Thanks Tamizhini and good to see you back~~

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